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Truth or Dare?
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Truth, oh truth, can you tell me,
Do, oh do, oh do you love me?
Can you, can you tell me please,
Truth, the truth if you please.
Poison kills only body;
Soul and heart still stand strong.
Separate, spread, contaminate my flesh.
I could do whatever I wish,
I just wish it was with you.
I don't trust much to fate,
Don't leave any to chance.
Can't sit back and just relax,
Keep on moving, keep on pushing:
I'll never stand aside.
Truth, oh truth, can you tell me,
Do, oh do, oh do you love me?
Can you, can you tell me please,
Truth, the truth if you please.
Fact or false, I'm standing here.
Truth I pick, dare I leave.
I wait for you, for only you.
For you to ask what you please –
For me to whisper, breathe reality.
Do, oh do, oh do you love me?
Can you, can you tell me please,
Truth, the truth if you please.
Poison kills only body;
Soul and heart still stand strong.
Separate, spread, contaminate my flesh.
I could do whatever I wish,
I just wish it was with you.
I don't trust much to fate,
Don't leave any to chance.
Can't sit back and just relax,
Keep on moving, keep on pushing:
I'll never stand aside.
Truth, oh truth, can you tell me,
Do, oh do, oh do you love me?
Can you, can you tell me please,
Truth, the truth if you please.
Fact or false, I'm standing here.
Truth I pick, dare I leave.
I wait for you, for only you.
For you to ask what you please –
For me to whisper, breathe reality.
I haven't written in a very long time, and this is sort of my comeback, so I realize it's not my best. I'm posting it for critical feedback. So please be ruthless.
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Hmm. Reminds me a little bit of a song. 
I like it! It's definately a change from your usual style and topics, but it is a good change. Thanks for putting this up on here, it really is great! 
I like it! It's definately a change from your usual style and topics, but it is a good change. Thanks for putting this up on here, it really is great!